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=//** Assalamualaikum....hai there!! **//=

//**Well, this is my first Public Speaking practice for happy news. I put three audio that I think that's the best three that can be acceptable... =)**// //**I hope you can leave comments so that I can improve my happy voice. Thank you and hoping that you will enjoy it... ^_^**//


 * The text:**
 * __Hackey baby girl born 1.11am on 1/1/2011__**
 * A Hoxton family is celebrating the arrival of a bonny new girl born at 1.11am on January 1, 2011.**
 * Victoria Cording gave birth to her third child, Olivia Daniels, at Homerton Hospital in the early hours of New Year's Day.**
 * The 23-year-old of Provost Estate, Murray Grove, said she and Olivia's father, Kirk Daniels, 25, were delighted to take home their new addition.**
 * "It's brilliant. She's very good. She doesn't really moan, only when she wants feeding," Victoria said.**
 * Olivia was one of the 14 babies delivered at Homerton Hospital on New Year's Day.**

//**This is my first public speaking practice (happy news) :**// media type="file" key="public speaking practice 1 (happy news 3).mp3" width="240" height="20" //**This is my second public speaking practice (happy news) :**// media type="file" key="public speaking practice 1 (happy news).mp3" width="240" height="20" //**This is my third public**// //**speaking practice (happy news) :**// media type="file" key="public speaking practice 1 (happy news 2).mp3" width="240" height="20"

//**Please leave your comments here:**//

//**shira: haha...sounds happy..but you talk too fast, I can't understand what you talking about..anyway, good job.. =)**//

//**Fara: three of it sound happy and almost the same. hehe**//

** AMY: **

 * 1) ** volume- i need to control the volume of my voice. and I'm talking too fast which i need to learn how to slow down a bit. **
 * 2) ** pitch-I'm talking too fast **
 * 3) ** rate-there's happiness in my voice, need to practice more. **
 * 4) ** emotion- i can hear the happy emotion in my voice. **
 * 5) ** pronunciation- i admit that there is some mistakes in the pronunciation which i need to improved more. **

FARA:
 * 1) volume: the volume is okay and I can hear the voice clearly.
 * 2) pitch: you talk to fast and its hard to me to understand the news.
 * 3) rate: you sound happy.
 * 4) emotion: from your voice i can imagine that you are smiling.
 * 5) pronunciation: there are some pronunciation error in you record.

** SHIRA SAYS: **

 * 1) ====** volume-I think the volume is litttle bit slow. **====
 * 2) ====** pitch-the pitch is okay, but you need to slow down your speech. **====
 * 3) ====** rate-the rate is quite okay **====
 * 4) ====** emotion- you sound happy **====
 * 5) ====** pronunciation- you must keep practice to improve your pronunciation **====