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= = Assalamualaikum....hai there!! == //Well, this is my third Public Speaking practice that is recite two poems// //. I didn't know if I've recite the poems correctly because honestly I didn't know how to recite a poem. I've try to find some reference how to recite those poems but unfortunately I just found one. So, I've try my best to recite those to poems with my on style. i hope that you will enjoys it and please leave comments and more information about poems if you have it so that I can improve my performance. Thank you... >, volume- i need to control the volume of my voice.
 * 2)  pitch-there's tones on my voice.
 * 3)  rate-there's happiness in my voice, need to practice more.
 * 4) emotion- i can't really feel the emotion recite the poems.
 * 5) pronunciation- i need to be careful with my pronunciation in because it's really difficult pronounce words that is similar.

** SHIRA SAYS: **

 * 1) ====** volume- the volume is good and clear. your voice can be heard clearly for both poem **====
 * 2) ====** pitch-you have different and varies pitch for both poem. **====
 * 3) ====** rate-there is different rate for your voice. sometimes you talk slow, and sometimes fast. **====
 * 4) ====** emotion- maybe you should feel the love in first poem, and should feel more proud when read the second poem. **====
 * 5) ====** pronunciation- you must practice more on pronunciation to improve it since there was some mistake, since the word sometimes be confused. **====

FARA:
 * 1) volume: the volume is clear as i can hear your voice clearly.
 * 2) pitch: your pitch for these two poem are varies.
 * 3) rate: there is rate where sometimes you deliver the poem in slow and fast rate.
 * 4) emotion: in the first poem, there is less romantic emotion. but in the second poem there is patriotic emotion.
 * 5) pronunciation: there is less pronunciation error even sometimes there words is confusing and similar.